Missy. 40 (OMG OLD). Part-time writer, rp-er and fanperson. Pro writer-slash-businessperson-slash journalist (plz buy my books). Will make a difference somehow, someday.
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“Land of light, the army of darkness shall sweep down. They are gathered like a horde of avengers, life within life, the power that summons. Come back, Old ones, princes of darkness and reposess the Earth.”
When the author describes a character’s appearance way too late and you have to quickly redesign the image you already have for them in your head:
This is why if you want people to know your character has long raven-black hair with red streaks and eyes like limpid tears, you need to make sure you say so in your first paragraph. Christ. Imagine someone thinking your character’s a prep.
Holy shit I’m dying.
That. That literally explains the opening paragraph of My Immortal I was making a joke but this person came out here with receipts holy hell
NEVER forget the wild ride that is the first page of The Vampire Lestat.